The head looks a little long from the profile. I think it would be a good idea to remove the front of the face from the nose down and, after cutting away some clay from the face, re-attach it so it slants a bit more inward (see illustration). I think this will go a long way to getting a more realistic look. Keep up the nice work!
Hi Jordu , thanks you for the advice you
gave me towards improving my sculpture, I feel like it gave me a boost of
confidence and knowledge in creating my sculpts.
These are the adjustments I made. First I
removed a little mass from the back of the head (profile view). Then I took a
wedge out from the face to bring the jaw inwards a bit. I also added some small
bits of clay in the brow to make him look, not angry but focused on something.
Hmmm I’m not sheer whether or not I achieved that, but that was my intention.
After I made the adjustment you recommended, I finished up the sculpt with a
big beefy neck.
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Hi Jordu , thanks you for the advice you gave me towards improving my sculpture, I feel like it gave me a boost of confidence and knowledge in creating my sculpts.
These are the adjustments I made. First I removed a little mass from the back of the head (profile view). Then I took a wedge out from the face to bring the jaw inwards a bit. I also added some small bits of clay in the brow to make him look, not angry but focused on something. Hmmm I’m not sheer whether or not I achieved that, but that was my intention. After I made the adjustment you recommended, I finished up the sculpt with a big beefy neck.
Thank you
Daniel J. Capozzi